The feedback wasn’t as glowing as past assignments on this one, but I’m not shocked by that as I wasn’t 100% happy with it myself.
There were some very good points made in the feedback that I agree with. I could have said more in a few cases, I said I wanted a two stop difference between the sides of an item to make it look more interesting, but I didn’t say why. He also commented that placing them in locations that you wouldn’t expect to see them could have made the shots more interesting, if I decide to reshoot any before submitting this module for assessment then I may do this with some of them.
For next time…
- Look at the work of Edward Weston and Irving Penn in relation to lighting an object and still life experimentation
- Add more to the bibliography
- If I say I’m doing something say why
